Sign Language (2010) Short Film


The main theme of Sign Language is love, as well as concurring your fears. Our main character doesn’t have courage to tell this girl how he feels. The film represents this everyday struggle people feel.


The approach by Oscar Sharp is a ‘mockumentary’, where it’s presented like a documentary, but it’s totally fictional. This approach worked really well and I enjoyed it. Presenting it like a documentary made it look real, which in itself made it more of a joke because the subject and idea is so ridiculous. Also having the main character present it like it’s a documentary helps the audience suspend our disbelief on the silly story, and allows the audience to connect more with the character, and imagine what it would be like to be him standing on the street with this boring job.

The stylistic choice of repeating shots relates to it’s content because you can imagine holding a sign everyday would get very tedious. The use of a deep focus on the character showed to the audience how the job makes him feel alone and the fact all we hear is his dialogue shows to us that it makes him feel lonely.

Overall I found this film really funny and the documentary style really added to the hilarity.

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Character Development

Me and Ellie Burrow's worked together on creating a character from the 45 questions provided. Below is the profile of the character we thought of:

Name: Brian
Age: 75
Appearance: Old, ginger hair, bright coloured clothes
What do you know about this character which he doesn't know yet: An old neighbor fancies him
Greatest flaw: He's verging on insane
Vice: Judgmental about anyone
Who does he prefer to live with: Prefers to live alone
Biggest flaw: Depressed in his old age
Biggest regret: Never been married
Obsession: Huge fan of Elvis

From this character we thought about creating a five minute drama about how Brian dislikes this admirer. He's judgmental about everyone but the comedic aspect would be hearing his thoughts on this woman. He doesn't know acknowledge she likes him even though the signs are obvious.

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The Collectors Vimeo Link

Here is the link to the final cut of The Collectors documentary: https://vimeo.com/157639666

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Evaluation

I am very happy with the final outcome. I was hugely disappointed with the first edit by Josh, but after re-editing it turned out exactly how I had imagined. For an audience, I think we keep their interest throughout. We did this by purposely using a large amount of cutaway shots and keeping the interviewee’s answers down to a minimum. The largest positive is the interviewee’s are very passionate and interesting to listen to, we also got three interviews at three different locations which gave us a substantial amount of answers and cutaway shots to work with. I am very happy with the framing of my shots and the microphone quality. Some negative were that the shops we shot in had no room for lighting; preferably we would have created a three light setup to get a more pleasing shot. Also there was no room for boom pole so we couldn’t get as close as we wanted with the microphone. Lastly customers consistently came in to the shop during the interviewers, which distracted the interviewer, and affected the sound recordings. If I was to redo the project I would make sure we could get an interviewer with a younger collector to get their perspective on the vinyl resurgence.

My original role was the cinematographer, but at the end of the project I also became the editor. As a group we approached three vinyl shops. After, I compiled a shot list and the producer arranged for us to film there. I booked out the equipment throughout the project. We filmed interviews at two of these locations, but the other one didn't work out because they were moving shops the week we wanted to film. The producer managed to make contact with an older collector who we were able to interview, we wanted to interview him next to his collection but because his flat is small he admitted it wasn't best to film him there. We managed to get in contact with a bar close to his house, and they allowed us to film the interview there because they knew him. We also planned on interviewing a younger collector to get their perspective, however he wasn't able to commit to the project. My main contribution was shooting each interview and all cutaway shots of the locations. The original edit was disappointing, as the editor didn't give himself enough time. I started a new edit, working with the director, and this time it was more like we visualized.

This was the first project I had used the Canon XF100. I spent a while learning the controls of the camera, and I have gained confidence in using it. I taught myself how to setup a Konova K5 slider as well. This was my first time as editor on a project too. Initially I was reluctant using Avid as I was unfamiliar with it, but after editing this project I have gained confidence and would work with it again. Creatively I spent some time creating the opening title shot which features the title 'The Collectors' key framed onto the vinyl sleeve.


Initially we worked well as a team. We communicated well and had regular group meetings. However towards the end of the project we lost contact with Nathan for a week, and Josh left the edit too late and it was not what we wanted. Phil and me worked the best together and ended up re-editing the documentary between us. My strengths as a team member would be I am very conscious of time and like to get the work done quickly so nobody is waiting for me. I would say I’m a very committed team member and I’m always up for helping. The negatives of my team working skills would be that I tend to rush things because I’m conscious of time, I need to learn how to relax and not stress. I also like to do things myself and I would like to learn how to put my trust in other members.

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My role on the project

I chose to do cinematography as I haven't done this on the course yet and I was keen to be able to use the skills I have learnt.

I researched in to the job of a documentary cinematographer and what it entails. I used this source: http://red-gecko-productions.com/redgecko/2010/07/29/the-skills-of-a-documentary-cinematographer/ which goes in to detail about the skills of a documentary cinematographer.

The source mentions the importance of "The collaboration between the documentary director and the cinematographer is one of the most important elements of the filmmaking process. Since the cinematographer’s task is to help realize the director’s vision" this made me realise how important it is to communicate with Phil (Director) so I can understand exactly what he wants from me as a cinematographer. I want to make sure i'm capturing what he is imagining and getting as much detail as he needs. I had many conversations with Phil along the way to fully understand his approach to the documentary.


The source talks about how it's a cinematographers responsibility in "taking care of all camera equipment needs. Order the camera equipment if it is hired, test and adjust it and master all its needs and working principles." It was my job to book out all the equipment for the documentary. I renewed the equipment three times so we could continue to use the same kit. It was also my job to make sure that everything was handled carefully and nothing was lost. The foam lapel mic windshields were almost lost multiple times and I had to constantly ask Nathan to make sure he had put it in the bag.

The source mentions that "A cinematographer should know his equipment inside-out". Since I hadn't used the XF100 on a project before I took the equipment out so that I could play around and get to know the camera before we started filming. I made sure all the settings were already setup a few days prior to shooting so that I was more confident. I also tested using the slider in my flat, because I've never used one before and it was key that we got slider shots of the vinyl racks. The video of me testing the slider can be found here


Next, the source mentions other things my job entails:
  • Scouting locations to assess light and electricity supplies,
  • Lighting aesthetics,
  • Setting up lighting instruments,
I was in charge of lighting on set. I argued to the team that since we were filming in such small locations that using a three point lighting setup would be impossible. I told them we could use a DSLR LED light that clips on top of the camera, this would use up less space. It turned out that we didn't need the LED light because natural lighting was fairly good. Apart from in Rodger's interview where I had to think hard about where we placed him. I ended up having to set the chair for Rodger facing a window so we could use the natural light coming in. Apart from that lighting wasn't too much of a problem for me to think about.

The source goes on to mention two other key parts of a cinematographers job:
  • Deciding camera positioning in collaboration with the director, and
  • Making all camera movements.
On set I setup the camera, including setting it to 25fps, 1080p, turning the gain off, checking the camera was in manual, and taking a white balance. I also helped Nathan (Sound) by plugging the lapel mic into channel 1 and the shotgun mic in to channel 2. I made sure the settings for the external mics were setup properly and I looked at the audio levels as the interviews were taking place just to make sure they weren't peaking. For the interviews and cutaways, I filmed every shot seen in the documentary and I had the final say as to how we shot each interview and cutaway. I sometimes asked the director (Phil) how he wanted the interview framing as it was his vision, I also felt more confident walking around with Phil so I made sure I got what he wanted and didn't miss anything important.

Below are other things I did for the project:

Me and Josh worked together on producing the presentation and pitch for the Forge Masters documentary idea. We wanted to explore why Forge Masters had sacked 100 jobs recently and what was going on in the steel industry. This idea wasn't used but the presentation me and Josh produced can be found here: http://www.slideshare.net/JoshFryer1/documentary-pitch-steel-city I believe we did a good job of the presentation but it was disappointing to find out that Forge Masters were not prepared to allow us to film at this current time.

As part of the research process I created a small document of research about the vinyl industries increase in sales and also a small look at LP Record Store. I didn't know much about the vinyl industry so researching into it helped me understand it better. I wanted to make sure I understood what the director was aiming at throughout this documentary and the document can be found here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Dm7HtCrqgb3bSRwtMZiZPbdq2l1RFR4xJFYSWbTFPH0/edit?usp=sharing

As a group we went around three LP stores in Sheffield. LP Record Store, Vinyl Demand and Record Junkie. I looked around to make sure I had a sense of shot ideas and lighting availability. After the visit I created a shotlist for these five locations we planned on filming at. Three record stores and the two collectors homes. The shot list can be found here, and I referenced it throughout each recording session: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FST8XPyUrcgkn4do_jhB1DNstqVqXzB2nIouUeMNZL8/edit?usp=sharing

It was also my job to import the clips on to Avid ISIS for Josh to edit, and to make it easier for Josh to edit. I transcribed Mark Richardson's (LP Record Store) interview. The transcribe can be found here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QQ5qConyeP4PEbvKlYvIrXLVp5E7znNHkPtD03bvhSA/edit?usp=sharing

However Josh only left 24 hours to edit the entire documentary and it came out badly and we were extremely disappointed. Thankfully we got a 4 day extension and I took over the edit and started from scratch. Phil (Director) sat a long side we throughout the whole edit and this made sure it was exactly how our director has envisioned it at the start of the project.

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Feedback from 22nd February 2016

Since we were filming up until Saturday 20nd February we hadn’t made an edit. All we had done was import the clips and rename some of them. Instead we showed our footage to Debbie. Debbie said our interviews were very substantial, especially Mark’s from LP Record Store who was extremely passionate and funny. She also said the framing of the interviews looked great, which I was pleased with because it was my job. Since we hadn’t got an interview from Josh the young 20 year old collector, we explained our concern. However Debbie said we had enough footage and interviews for a five minute documentary. Debbie suggested instead of having the young person’s perspective, we would have to tell it from the older generation’s opinion only, and she believes that we have enough footage already to do this. She helped us work out a plan for the edit, and we have now decided we will cut the documentary by having each interviewer answer the same questions simultaneously. This will work well as some of them contradict each other. We explained we haven’t got shots of Rodger’s collection yet, and she said it was very important we got this. Lastly she explained that it was important we transcribed each interview so the editor can easily cut the clips up. I will transcribe Mark Richardson’s interview, Phil is transcribing Rodger’s and Josh is transcribing Andrew’s interview.

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Planning and Production

Planning documentation:

Our group has a Google drive setup where all our planning documentation is placed. The link is here: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B9bbNdqZDPVMOEZZblN1a1ZLWG8

As of 11/2/16 there is currently documents with interview questions, two treatments, and research documents to further our knowledge about the vinyl resurgance.

Plan:

Wednesday 11th February 2016: 15:00 - Group visit to various record stores around Sheffield. We will begin a shot list, sound list and confirm a date and time for the filming of the shops and interviews.

This session went ahead as planned, we visited Record Junkee, Vinyl Demand and LP Record Store. We talked to all the shop owners and they agreed to do an interview and allow us to record cutaway shots next week.

Tuesday 16th February 2016: Book out equipment, and record interview at Record Junkee of the manager. We will also collect cutaway shots.

We booked out the equipment as planned, however Record Junkee sadly cancelled at the last minute as the admitted they were moving shops and it wouldn't be convenient to film.

Wednesday 17th February 2016: 17:00 Record interview with Andrew Plaxton (Manager of Vinyl Demand) and record cutaway shots of Vinyl Demand.

Session took place as planned. The interview went very well and I recorded some good cutaway shots. However, it was dark outside so I will record some establishing shots of the shop tomorrow.

Thursday 18th February 2016: 15:00 Record interview with Mark Richardson (Manager of LP Record Store) and record cutaway shots at LP Record Store.

I recorded four establishing shots of Vinyl Demand as I was on my way to this recording session. At LP Record Store we got a fantastic interview, cutaways and some really excellent slider shots of the shop.

Friday 19th February 2016: Josh will import the clips recorded and as a group we will rebook the equipment out for the weekend.

Everything went to plan. Josh imported the video files on to ISIS and Avid Media Composer and began to rename each clip.

Saturday 20th February 2016: Interview with Rodger Baker, who has been collecting vinyl for 30 years.

We originally wanted to film the interview at Rodger's apartment so we could show his huge collection, however he said at the last minute that it was too small for that and asked if we could meet at another location. Thankfully Phil (Producer) got in contact with a bar called The Tramshed which is around the corner from Rodger's flat. The bar has an upstairs gallery where some of Rodger's photographs are being shown. The owner of the bar instantly knew who Rodger was and thankfully  said we could use the upstairs of her bar to film the interview and cutaways of some of Rodger's vinyl's which he was bringing with him. The bar owner allowed us to come in and film at 2:00, she didn't open until 4:00 so we had 2 hours. We recorded a fantastic interview with Rodger and I recorded some great cutaway shots of his favorite vinyls and some photographs of bands he had brought with him.

Sunday 21st February 2016: Interview with Josh Powesland, a young 20 year old collector of vinyl.

Session didn't take place. Sadly Josh didn't get back to Phil about doing the interview. It was important for us that we got a young collectors perspective in the documentary and it was all about the new youth movement with vinyl.

Saturday 27th February 2016: Record cutaways of Rodger Bakers collection at his flat.

Got pushed back to Saturday instead of Thursday but went as planned. Poor lighting but got a few shots of his collection.

Monday 29th February 2016: Josh set to finish edit

Disappointing to find out Josh hadn't started the edit and only gave himself 24 hours to do it.

Wednesday-Thursday: Start the edit again

Me and Phil re-edited the entire documentary as Josh didn't give himself enough time and it wasn't how the group had envisioned it.

Log sheets:

Shot list by Tom Cushnie (Cinematographer)

I compiled a shotlist for each location we originally planned on recording at:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FST8XPyUrcgkn4do_jhB1DNstqVqXzB2nIouUeMNZL8/edit?usp=sharing

Equipment list:

  • Canon XF100

  • Standard Film/Video Tripod
Standard Photo Tripod
  • Konova K5 Slider

Konova K5 Slider


  • 50cm White Reflector


















  • 2x Lapel Microphones















  • Zoom H4N
















  • Audio Technica AT8015















  • Sony HVL-LBP Led Battery Light












Production stills:

Some stills from researching record stores for the documentary on 11th February 2016. The whole group went together and Phil took some photos of each store we looked at:

LP Record Store:

















Record Junkee:

















Vinyl Demand:































Behind the scenes:

Josh was overseeing the health and safety of the production as well as taking behind the scenes photos.


Thursday 18th February 2016 - LP Record Store:















Friday 19th February 2016 - Importing and editing:





















Saturday 20th February 2016 - Interview with Rodger Baker at The Tramshed, Sheffield



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